Comments on: The Battle of Oascera: Chapter 2 http://www.abyssia.com/articles/featured-articles/20-sided-lover/the-battle-of-oascera-chapter-2 You've probably never heard of us. Sat, 24 Dec 2011 02:12:03 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: Fatal http://www.abyssia.com/articles/featured-articles/20-sided-lover/the-battle-of-oascera-chapter-2/comment-page-1#comment-86 Fatal Fri, 29 May 2009 12:04:43 +0000 http://abyss.internetlantic.com/?p=283#comment-86 I'm liking this. Unlike Nomad, I don't have a real problem with the format, but sure it could be improved a bit. All in all, this is enjoyable to follow. I’m liking this. Unlike Nomad, I don’t have a real problem with the format, but sure it could be improved a bit. All in all, this is enjoyable to follow.

]]> By: Nomad http://www.abyssia.com/articles/featured-articles/20-sided-lover/the-battle-of-oascera-chapter-2/comment-page-1#comment-69 Nomad Tue, 26 May 2009 01:22:10 +0000 http://abyss.internetlantic.com/?p=283#comment-69 <p>Finally finished reading it. Good stuff so far. Can't wait to read the rest! You are talented with description without redundancy.</p> <p>I suggest maybe adding some images (maybe just some random D&D inspired images or something, to help illustrate the characters or setting), and as I mentioned before breaking it up into pages, to make it a little more aesthetically pleasing. I don't know about everyone else, but it's difficult for me to read a wall of text.</p> Finally finished reading it. Good stuff so far. Can’t wait to read the rest! You are talented with description without redundancy.

I suggest maybe adding some images (maybe just some random D&D inspired images or something, to help illustrate the characters or setting), and as I mentioned before breaking it up into pages, to make it a little more aesthetically pleasing. I don’t know about everyone else, but it’s difficult for me to read a wall of text.

]]> By: Acyclitor http://www.abyssia.com/articles/featured-articles/20-sided-lover/the-battle-of-oascera-chapter-2/comment-page-1#comment-68 Acyclitor Tue, 26 May 2009 00:31:46 +0000 http://abyss.internetlantic.com/?p=283#comment-68 ah excellent ah excellent

]]> By: Nomad http://www.abyssia.com/articles/featured-articles/20-sided-lover/the-battle-of-oascera-chapter-2/comment-page-1#comment-65 Nomad Mon, 25 May 2009 19:36:54 +0000 http://abyss.internetlantic.com/?p=283#comment-65 Yo Kyle, I just found out that you can paginate posts. So if you want to make these a little more readable (i.e. less wall-o-text), use this: <code> <!--nextpage--> </code> Yo Kyle, I just found out that you can paginate posts. So if you want to make these a little more readable (i.e. less wall-o-text), use this:


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